Beautiful (Triolet)
by Maple Tree Feb 10, 2012
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Marigold moonbeams consume me |
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12 years ago
by Lonely Rider
What a lovely imagery ...
//Marigold moonbeams consume me
// how lovely... the analogy with marigold is so creative :)
/Sunsets breathe on a coral sea
// I adored these lines ... you have described the sunset with such breathtaking imagery :)
//Emeralds shine on dragon trees
// I loved the use of dragn here... again very creative and impressive.
An amazing triloet filled with brilliant images :) -
12 years ago
This is a lovely triolet, with beautifully expressed words. Your poem is equivalent to the title, beautiful! Your words were well-chosen, I like this format. The use of repetition is important to this form, and your repeated lines were exquisite.
It was a true joy to read. Well done! :) -
12 years ago
This is just beautiful. I"m not fond of this format, I guess because it was mind breaking for me haha..But you did a great job
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12 years agoby Ms Happiness
OMG this is great:)
I liked this form, its the 1st time for me to hear of it:) -
12 years ago
by Ms Happiness
OMG this is great:)
I liked this form, its the 1st time for me to hear of it:)
