Comments : Where is Joseph?

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    Not exactly quite sure what this was about. But I can say I really feel the emotion brought out in this poem. the longing for your son here is very ell expressed. Very nice write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    The thoughts of not knowing the whereabouts of your child is the most terrifying and depressing feeling. If the child is no more; one just needs to let go and pray for the repose of the soul. Having in mind, someday we all will depart to meet again in the herafter; is a consolation. However, 'a missing childs', memories always hunts you down, giving life no meaning of survival. It keeps derailing you till it consumes you but with faith, you get salvation from The Almighty. The downpour of emotions was amazing, spell binding. Captivating scenery, you never cease to baffle me with your pieces. Always inspiring; Mashallah, blessings to you dearie. Adio!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    The thoughts of not knowing the whereabouts of your child is the most terrifying and depressing feeling. If the child is no more; one just needs to let go and pray for the repose of the soul. Having in mind, someday we all will depart to meet again in the herafter; is a consolation. However, 'a missing childs', memories always hunts you down, giving life no meaning of survival. It keeps derailing you till it consumes you but with faith, you get salvation from The Almighty. The downpour of emotions was amazing, spell binding. Captivating scenery, you never cease to baffle me with your pieces. Always inspiring; Mashallah, blessings to you dearie. Adio!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Ummm, Nana I don't know the concept of this...
    I imagine the child to have been taken by army guards,
    or maybe is a refugee or something.

    But the imagery was strong,
    I liked this alot,
    will read again later, as am on my phone right now.

    :)
    love xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Im studying math at the moment and i know id get f**d up tomorrow... And this comes to make my night. I don't know if you know a mother who lost her son... But i know, and this is just so creative, emotional, and inspiring! You go girl :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Just for ur info, ýousef is my son!

    EDIT: this comment was only for ABED, has nothing to do with the poem! the poem is NOT personal.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh my Nana, I never knew you had a son!! This makes this all the more understandable and emotional, what a powerful piece of poetry

    love u girl xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    He is somewhere, I know you will find him oneday :P

    Great piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Nana how friggin heartbreaking is this :(

    I just wanted to ask, is this a poem about how you felt when your son was missing or is he still missing?

    I am asking myself so many questions - how old is your son, how long has it been since he's gone missing.

    I am so sorry hun. This poem really shows so much emotion in the words.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    Well this is different. did you mysteriously pop one out woman.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    :P bahahahhahahahahhahahahahha at Liz and Tara<3 - They got emotional so fast :P