Comments : My Love Revealed

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Can you look at me even just once?
    Here in my heart I'm holding a chance
    Right in your arms, could i belong?
    In this idiocy, could i be wrong?

    Your first few lines had already captured me. Yes, loving someone secretly is quite idiotic sometimes. :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Miyaki Zhen

      Hehe! yah you're right.! and sometimes it could even make you insane! hehe. :)