Mashallah!! I love nature so much and this poem describes how nature appeals to us. I like how started off and your transition was intact and the rhythm flowed smoothly. Beautiful scenery, i could see the events unfolding with vibrant colors. I so much love the peace this poem radiates within ones soul. This is more than brilliant, Tabarakallah!

You are a very good writer, my friend.
I am a fan of nature too and believe in cherishing every moment of our life.
The best way to do it go out in the nature, like, near a sea or some hill or forest.

Nature itself is a healer. It always tranquils our body and soul.

Good job, once again.