by Marino Vilano Feb 11, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Are you proud of yourself when you try to hide, |
by East Poetry
Very nice poem Marino, I think its really cool that through out your journey to marriage you never gave up and pushed for what you wanted. Im glad she came to her senses and realized the catch she had. I really did like the ending to your poem and the idea of your love catching her after she let herself fall. 5/5 |
by L
I see christophers point. Please don't take his comment by heart. The thing is that this poem is too personal and only a few people can relate to it. |
by Olga Vilano
Theres never a wrong or right poem honestly, and the words u used babe wer stunning, when it comes from the heart, you can feel it, thats a fact. |
But thanks |
Well I'm not sorry you feel that way because honestly this poem was not just about me |