Awwww wow this is so good it soo sad Babii

I loved it hun(:
5/5 for sure(:

Aww...that was touching,hope u'll recover soon.Liked it ! 5/5.

Too often, people don't let others know when there is abuse going on. This poem lets "us", the readers, in to see the emotions of the abused person. Very well written.

When a girl I loved told me she never loved me back I could not sleep for days on end and still to this day I have sleeping troubles because of her I know how you feel keep writeing

"broken, like a dish out of clay."
I liked how you penned this..
Another well-written poem :)
5/5

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