Broken Heart

PS, stay strong, it only gets better with time :-)

Really stunning poem.I love that you haven't written the usual one-sided"why did you leave me here all broken"type of poem, you had the courage to write both side's and show that yes you made a mistake, but everyone makes mistakes once in a while."she left me in the middle of the ocean, where there is no value for my tears"what a magnificent image, beautifully written line with powerful depth of emotion.yes, there are times in life when you make mistakes and though pain of the consequences can youmake you feel as though you'd rather be in hell, but be strong and know that this too shall pass,I speak from experience, very recent experience, where I was at risk of losing my soulmate, but things are better now, and though we don't talk for reasons beyond our control,I can at least sleep at night knowing that we've made peace and still love each other and perhaps fate will smile upon us,I hope she does, and for I too :-)

Wow, the second line really spoke out to me, incredible poem, it blew me away

Your pain of separation is the price of your mistakes. You have paid the price. May God shower happiness on you in future!

Lesson learned, saves a future blame. Forgiveness is solemn vengeance. It takes heated cloud, to make rain. The best, is meant to come at last. It's not over, untill you win. Be strong, for a good turn awaits.