A miracle in my life.

by Ole Carsten   Feb 11, 2012


You love to me is precious, for me,
I love you as a miracle in my life.

My heartbeats are rushing my blood
It beats faster, than I can count
Missing your sweetness
Let us meet in a virtual kissing.

Let people think what they want
I am happy for you my love
The internet is teasing, by being on and of.
My love is always on

I enjoy your words, they are my minds balsam
Your love is what keeps my heart together
Your love is what brings joy into my life
As I hope you feel my love bring joy in your life

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Everlasting
    All communication is disconected from time to time. And aas for me and many others at the wrong time, you batteries went flat befor a goodbye or worse see you again, or likewise.
    Felling in love with a picture, dating on line, is filled with small image, the only way to a soulmate, is seldom more than 1x2 centimeters, often even without a real name.
    This is not to defend my self just to set the scene, and that is to me my error.
    love comments Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I think this piece needs revision on a few parts but just to take Care of the flow. Aside from that I have to say that I love this piece. Love in the Internet is like falling in love with written words instead love at first sight.
    And how the Internet can disconnect and connect but no matter what your love it's there. I found that so sweet.

    Editted: On second thoughts.. Perhaps revision will not be necessary because this piece is filled with raw emotions and I'm afraid that those revisions might hurt this piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks Karla, love Ole

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Beaitiful poem Ole.

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