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by Nobody cares
OMG everything in this poem is so beautiful. It literally made me cry. the details are so vivid. Just gotta say Out of all the poems ive read in this website this poem is the best there is. Amazing Job =) 5-5. but in my mind it broke my scale |
Thank you very much for reading this piece. It was emotional to write as well. The song comes from what I sang to my daughter from birth on up...lol and still do on some occasions. |
by Burning Angel
Wow, this was amazing. i loved it. you were right. it was a tear jerker and I loved how he done everything to protect his daughter, even if, in the end they both lost their lives. I guess what hit me most was the prayer and song they sung together. :) I love it! There is so much emotion in this piece and the reader will always have an emotional time reading this! |