I love the darkness and word usage within this awesome piece!

Wow, lovely wordings portraying darkness and fear. Kept me going like a fiction novel, very horrific, it seems as if the beast is within the walls of ones room, lol. I like your creativity of making the reader want more of the unfolding battle of survival. Very interesting and gripping read, a big 5/5. God be with you always, Cheers!

No comment...I luv t .