Elegant Design (Septolet)

by Maple Tree   Feb 13, 2012


Marshmallow clouds
Softly weeping
crystal
Tear drops.

Elegant snow angels
Design a
winter painting.

The Septolet is a poem consisting of seven lines containing fourteen words with a break in between
the two parts. Both parts deal with the same thought and create a picture.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww this is beautiful. And a very unique form to write.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Serene and beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely imagery - of snow angels and crystal tear drops.
    Beautiful write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Love the image of marshmallow clouds ....potent !

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    This is a definite you poem if I'd ever read one! Such beauty in such small pieces, and of course smacked wow with nature. Love your stuff, you! Always have!

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