by Yakori bint Muhammed Feb 13, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
9th January, 2012. |
Thanks for the comment, such overwhelming words. It's not a personal experience, but a tribute to those that have gone through such inhumane act. To accept, forgive and have hope to move on. Haven't thought of a sequel, but will think of that incase ideas come through. Thank you, blessings. :) .. |
by Dark Secrets
I believe that the best stories told are through poems, because they give you that extra song and thrill you need to be able to live it. I love the tittle, it's what caught my eye, and you used it in a very different way than I imagined, which intrigued me to read furthermore. I also think I understand what you mean by the tittle, that sometimes truth is a "treasure", but when it's something you'd rather not know it is "soiled". |
Berry sister, you came by, my gratitude is full to the brim. Thanks for the comments. God bless you, much love dear, Jazakallah. :) |
by christopher
Yakori thank for your comment and opinion. i don't know how long it took you to write soiled treasure or how much editing you done. at first glance and read i thought your poem was too long. the word used were descriptive and honest which came from your heart. i will dare to offer you a fools advice i edit and adit my poems and after about 4to 5 weeks i of writing the poem i put it away for a while and then i come back to the poem and see is there anything else i neet to correct or change. the less words the better your poetry but the words have to be wright for your poem keep writing your talent will blossom in time. |
Thanks for the comment, blessings to you. :) |