How true this is Yaki.
This was just a masterpiece beyond creativeness, you really are such an amazing writer, I can't begin to explain how I now feel.

Sometimes,
I wish I could take
back my words, my actions
and become a blank sheet
of paper again,
one that won't be crumbled
in someone's hand
and tossed in the trash
because it has too many mistakes
on it..

Sometimes,
I wish I was the final product,
without being a rough
draft first..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Just such in awe of the wording, simple yet so exquisite it is unreal. My favourite stanza.

You are just amazing!! :)

love xxxxxx

Everything about this poem is awesome and true.

I love the first stanza - Oh my - if only it were as easy as buying new packs of tea. If life were that easy it would be wonderful.

I love the flow of this poem and really enjoyed reading it.

Well done!!!

x