Unforgettable

by Lamont Milbourne   Feb 14, 2012


There's something that I could never forget from the moment I laid eyes to the moment we kissed, everything was perfect about her I have no regrets, no hard feelings about all of the hits, all the time spent with with her seemed like complete bliss and the moments I can't replicate I'll certainly miss.

I know I did you wrong I know that it was harsh, and I'd never wish to tear what you have with that man apart but this is the truth coming from the bottom of my heart.

There's no underlying agenda, no secret hidden plan I don't expect forgiveness I only pray you understand. I'm sorry I couldn't give you what you wanted in a man. I pray he gives you everything I couldn't give and if that's not the truth then I'll be damned.

I'm not trying to stir trouble I know your boyfriend could pump me on the double. I'm trying to say how I feel while this whisky as me brave and I burst out of the huddle before I crawl back into my corner in the fetus position giving myself a cuddle.

I've just got all these things on my chest, demons that I need to lay to rest. And I confess the temptations you gave were a test to my commitment but does it make me bad if my decisions are starting to feel like regrets?

I know there's no excuse, for the lies and mental abuse that I had put you through. I'm not here to get between your man and you I'd never make you choose but to tell you truth, this is an opportunity I refuse to lose, to say that a part of me still loves you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Dude...your poem only lacks structure at the first place....!!!
    I liked the feelings emoted,the wordings used should have been just a little bit more poem-like and other than that I would suggest you to cut the stanzas into much small and fragmented verse and put in commas,full-stops to accentuate reading and with a little bit of tweaks,your poem would just be fab...:)
    I hope to read more from you as your poem has honesty...:)

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