Yaki, I love reading poems like this...
Its sort of like listening to Adele, it's heartbreaking and emotional but really beautiful too,
Its one of those poems that I think is relatable and not at all cliche for this time of year. ie: Lovey dovey valentines writes

Great piece
smooth flow, well worded, like I said I love it
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This poem is so sad and so much emotions can be felt.

while you,
are probably putting
your soft hair behind
your ears,looking outside
the window and thinking

..of someone else..
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This to me was the :( of parts. The fact that this person may be loving someone else while you are loving them. Heartbreaking!!!

Great poem hun

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