Letter for Someone

by kamote07   Feb 15, 2012


Maybe we are miles away from each other now,
but until now i still have the same feelings that
i have for you since the day you said goodbye.

Its been a year with out seeing you,
i miss the glimpse of your eyes who
completed my days,god knows how
much i wanted to be with you again.

I still recall the time when we where together
those quarrel that strengthen our relationship
and of course the sweetest days that we
been sharing for so many years.

I wish i have a super power so that i can turn back
time into time when we where together and
i'll pause it forever in the moment that we are happy
together.

Maybe destiny can separate us,
but no matter what happened to us
i want you to know that im still here,
my dying days may come but the feelings
that i have would be forever yours.

All i want you to know is i never get tired
of loving you,im still here waiting for you
come what may i'll continue loving you.....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    Wow, the last three lines got me, thinking of the song I've made last year ago that has a title 'never get tired'

    Thanks for sharing your piece of writing men! ;D

  • 12 years ago

    by kamote07

    Thanks for the comment,.i promise next time i'll do it better..thanks ...

  • 12 years ago

    by kamote07

    Thanks for the comment,.i promise next time i'll do it better..thanks ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I think that you need to keep in mind to capiltalize the "I" and I do not really like the addiotional space line between the verses because it kind of distracted me and made me wonder what purpose it had, but then again it is up to you how cou'd like to present your poem.
    The content is clear, but you do not leave a lot of space for interpretation or imagination since you are really straightforward. I miss metaphors or images, that visualize your thoughts. Please do not take this personal. I realized that the emotions are quite strong.

    Oh and I also think that you should not put the title in full caps because it is against the rules as far as I know.

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkShadows

    "maybe destiny can separate us,

    but no matter what happened to us

    i want you to know that im still here,

    my dying days may come but the feelings

    that i have would be forever yours."

    BOOM! ... these are the very words my mind keep coming up with everytime I see that special someone I was once with... i so feel this..great poem!

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