I know all about living in fear, pretending, wearing a mask, hoping for people to hear my cry. I do hear your cry.

You lost me after the word unseen what happen your
rhyming and flow just went away keep it going it has to sing i gave you a 5 vote cause you have talent you just hAVE to keep them coming keep paper and pen with you always you always get a good line when you are'nt trying
im a fan of y0ou unquie writting style so don't get piss at my comments they are for you to get better

Nice poem I can relate sometimes :)

Awwhh...This girl seems like she's a mess. :( It's terrible how this happens, How the people who need the most attention, avoid attention the most! D: Too guarded for their own good. Well-written, hon!

I couldnt tell you how many girls I have met that are this way because of there past. Really cant blame them either because some people go through some bad stuff but just got to realize it all happens for a reason, and will make you into the person you will become !

5/5 Ahhhhmazin

"She holds back the tears
That are wonting to fall
Endlessly"
typo? wonting--wanting

"Just because she doesn't
Wont anyone to see...."
wont--want

This piece is so heart-felt. The rhymes flowed really well and the choice of words are simple yet perfect for the poem. Great write 5/5 :)

-X

Awww :/ this is beautiful<3

'She hides in the corner
For no one to see
The pain within her
Will remain unseen'

from time to time we may feel
like we just wanna hide how we
feel it gets too hard to bear sometimes :[
stay strong girly!!

5/5