Tells a story of a ritualistic woman, getting older
Placing her white flag on a dingy city sidewalk
Watching traffic drive by, singing her life song....
^^
This is my fav part:)
( singing her life song) < this line reminded me of something happened to me

All in all a really great poem:)

I'm out of words on what to say about this fantastic piece. It keeps one going on and on, unfolding the next daily ritual of the day for this sophisticated lady. I like the theme, the poem centres within.

KUDOS!!! Excellent piece. :)

Great imagery /words one can visualize it . Well done

I'm a fallen star, caught within a noon day sun
Lost between night and day, dew drop eyes

I'm amazed! This was excellent, As always. :) You painted your picture so well, I could almost taste nicotine or feel the chilly air on my skin. You've got that talent! Wonderful write! I like this.

5/5

5/5.Excellent write.One can visualize you sitting on the cemented .......moving in life by singing your life song.