Comments : Tame

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    The theme of the poem revolves around how hard life is in general. And while one is devising plans and such to act out life in a certain manner, the actual time scale shifts and life has already taken swift turns that an individual wasnt prepared for. And soon enough he/she will be rushing on with responsibilities. And this piece also revolves around how much pain is present in general.

    Very well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Nowadays,life haz become really fast.."power,respect nd endurance" As u said,hav really become the elements.The eyez of the individuals are tha only remains of victims !
    Really liked the theme.
    Good one Dallas,Appericiated !

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    I loved your poem's message!Well written!
    Great poem!

    Steven

  • 12 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    The people you see look in their eyes
    for our eyes tell the best story no lies no game

    faavorite<3

  • 12 years ago

    by William

    After reading a few of your writings, and enjoying them all, I can say without a doubt this one of my favorites! Great work.