Wow. I. Thought. This was. Amazing! Every. Thought was expressed very nicely. I could actually feel the emotion in this poem and I loved the line. you seem to have the words that bind me so my independence can't exist and also liked the part where you described the card up his sleeve. Very nice job! This one is going in my favs! :)

I thought this was a good poem. I reminded me of playing with peoples hearts. Something like a heart you have to be so careful with not to break. Very fragile. But I liked how you described here that you don't want to be hurt. Nice write. :)

Beautifully witten :]
great job
5/5