Comments : My Only

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Kelly;
    This is AMAZING(:

    I freaking love it<3.

    It seems like forever ago,
    that he was standing where I stand.
    Teaching me to skip rocks,
    in a place we deemed "our land"
    -Reminiscing about what happened way back then, as you can still feel it now in your heart.

    I watch the moonlight dance across the lake,
    creating shadows in the trees around its perfections,
    and patterns on the glass-like surface,
    taking in the beauty I remember our reflections.
    -This is one of my fav stanzas. You can visualize it in your mind as you read it.

    Such a deep sad poem. Remembering him as you fly away.

    Love love love it girl :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I agree with holly this eas beautiful powerful theres so much talant youve got amazing write