by Chelsey Feb 15, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I could bring to you |
Wow! Chelsey, this poem is so so so sweet and romantic! It was such a joy to read =D I really enjoyed it... I love the title and the first stanza, because at first the reader isn't sure what this poem is about... but as I continued reading it was clear what it's about. I really like how you developed the idea of not knowing what to get this person, from how special he is to you... |
by Ronel McCarthy
Beautiful ......we find a teacher whenever we learn something meaningful . |
by Jenni
I really enjoyed reading this poem, not only because of your choice of words and the images you create in my mind with it, but also because of the strong emotions. |
by Maple Tree
This piece is beautiful, and precious.... the heart can write such sweetness.... powerful lessons are love and trust...very pretty piece... |
by East Poetry
What a powerful love poem!!! |