Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I loveeee this love poem. Such beautiful images, sweet words.

I think it's great that you have put that they have taught you about how to love and the best parts of loving.

Awesome hun!!!

x

Wow, Chels......... what a sexy tone it was!! :)

And the opening, was a killer. You tickled my senses, if that's how they say it.

AWESOME

This has an erotic read to it, very hypnotic and kept flowing all through.
I love how pure and true the whole piece is, straight from the heart.
Beautifully penned, I likey alot.
Blessings of God be with you. :)

The best teachers are the ones who teach us about love.Lovely piece.

I agree with Karla.

This were my favorite lines

So no gift I could bring you
can measure up to
the gift you have given me-
a lesson on romance

For you, my baby,
you have taught me
to love far beyond
the depths of my soul.

This lines are written with so much love.
Your teacher has done an excellent job, and you as student haven't miss any lesson. I see, just paying Attention to every single word. Well done.

Now that's true love... it's a beautiful thing!!

You've penned a breathtaking piece...

What can I say? Amazing piece worded with beauty and emotion.
Great write

What a powerful love poem!!!
hands down he is very lucky to have your love!
your love is brighter then the sun!
I am so happy for you, there is nothing better then being a poet in love, especially a love that you have, that inspires you to write such an epic piece.

I asked my girl to marry me on valentines day!!

I wrote her two poems

Wave length
and
fundamental love

those are actually my two latest poems aside from After life, which you all ready read.

Ever get a chance to read them.. I'd love your opinion... course you now ill return the favor.

PS.... I confirmed adding you to my favor poets list.

This piece is beautiful, and precious.... the heart can write such sweetness.... powerful lessons are love and trust...very pretty piece...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, not only because of your choice of words and the images you create in my mind with it, but also because of the strong emotions.
I like the fact that the speaker is so convinced of the love she feels and I definately like the sensuality too!

Beautiful ......we find a teacher whenever we learn something meaningful .

Wow! Chelsey, this poem is so so so sweet and romantic! It was such a joy to read =D I really enjoyed it... I love the title and the first stanza, because at first the reader isn't sure what this poem is about... but as I continued reading it was clear what it's about. I really like how you developed the idea of not knowing what to get this person, from how special he is to you...

The last two stanzas were also a perfect ending. So beautiful! Great job job hon =D