by Karla Feb 15, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
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She hugged herself, |
by Timothy
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This is an undeniable masterpiece Karla. I'm rather speechless. I love the emotion in the last stanza, as well as the overall story (which was, by the way, breathtaking). Great passion was put into this poem, and great brilliance has it achieved. |
by Alejandro
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Your poem is good, but is a sad story. |
by Decayed
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Karla, this blew me away. |
by Ronel McCarthy
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Beautifully expresses the destruction caused by landmines .............broader sense , oppression |
by Ms Happiness
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I agree its really deep:) |