Loved the message, but you can work a bit on the layout. Cropping up some of the lines so each stanza doesn't have a space inbetween would do a lot to making it less of a chore to read. And perhaps cutting down some on the mass punctuation, here and there and it's great, but with such repitition its meaning is easily lost.

Idk ,bout othrs..bt i lvd wht u wrote..and d way u questioned..

I loved the message too. Stunning piece.

I like the message in it. I caught myself wondering what the question would have been :) I loved it!