by Yakori bint Muhammed Feb 16, 2012
category :
Friendship, family /
other
2010. |
Thanks for the comment TJ, i'm grateful. Cheers! :-). |
I've read poems about our shadow before but never quite like this one. Very creative, and well worded, great flow and all around excellent poem |
Thanks loads dear, I'm grateful. Blessings ;). |
Thanks loads dear, I'm grateful. Blessings ;). |
This was an interesting poem, I like the twist at the end! I like how you expressed paranoid emotions, and the fear of the unknown... I think that you expressed feelings people get at times.. sometimes people are insecure and not sure what's happening and are afraid. I love the title as well! |