Comments : Trying to feel your warmth...

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    I can really tell you miss this person. Your write confirms such strong emotion and longing to be back in her arms.
    good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Indeed a beautiful poem...:)
    the poem does emote your true feeling for that special someone and your longing to get her back as you realise her absence and feel her touch and love through her material things....!!

    Good start and good end...wordings were good as well...

    Sometimes, you're not there.
    I look for you anyway.
    I touch the spot where your head would lay,
    trying to feel your warmth...

    ^^
    very beautiful verse...
    good work...:)

  • 12 years ago

    by KDE Joyce

    I know that feeling all too well. I've been missing someone that was close to me, and this hits hard. Great work.