by East Poetry
A strong poem indeed, a piece to vent one frustrations about the world. I like how you describe the emptiness in the beginning and then hook it to the idea that you have lost the spark of your soul. |
by L
I agree with the above comment. |
by L
I agree with the above comment. |
by KDE Joyce
Wow, this is a moving poem. Stopped and made me think about stuff around me. I've definitely felt that way before too! Great peace. |