Comments : The world is off kilter

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    A strong poem indeed, a piece to vent one frustrations about the world. I like how you describe the emptiness in the beginning and then hook it to the idea that you have lost the spark of your soul.

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I agree with the above comment.
    The feeling of emptiness it's not the best one but fortunately, it can be fill up. So there is hope. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I agree with the above comment.
    The feeling of emptiness it's not the best one but fortunately, it can be fill up. So there is hope. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by KDE Joyce

    Wow, this is a moving poem. Stopped and made me think about stuff around me. I've definitely felt that way before too! Great peace.