Cargo

by Timothy   Feb 16, 2012


Really don't mind if your love isn't sweet,
the shrouds I should tug on are the lungs that I spit.
And the mouth that I own doesn't bloat all the crew,
for I call only your name - build the hull, traced the myth.

Don't you tell me now that my keel doesn't strip
to the quarterdeck puffing, far from freedom in the west.
Don't you ask me how my mast plants a maze
because it leeches to your marrow, girl, it mustn't be blown away.

Will you take me as I am if my cabin doesn't suit?
If my rudder rubs your slaving muscle - you're more than I can chew.
I tingle at the soured cream of fishing on your seat
because my spine is lost seething in this jacket culling wheat.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BearAnon

    This is great. I can see why you'd be displayed on the front page. I would pay more attention to the length of your lines with regard to the rhythm, I find some are too long and some too short. Perhaps I'm not pacing properly as I read.
    Great work, regardless.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    You can really change poetry into different levels each time, bro. Exalt, really. I rarely like rhyming poems, but this one.. it felt so unrestrained. I love the whole idea behind this, you being poor, with nothing significant to give to your lover.

    I love it.

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