by Timothy Feb 16, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Really don't mind if your love isn't sweet, |
by BearAnon
This is great. I can see why you'd be displayed on the front page. I would pay more attention to the length of your lines with regard to the rhythm, I find some are too long and some too short. Perhaps I'm not pacing properly as I read. |
by Decayed
You can really change poetry into different levels each time, bro. Exalt, really. I rarely like rhyming poems, but this one.. it felt so unrestrained. I love the whole idea behind this, you being poor, with nothing significant to give to your lover. |