Wow this poem is AMAZING:)
I love it

Karla-

Your breathtaking word usage along with your deep passion and heartfelt emotion is outstanding...I just love this piece...elegant comes to mind as well...well done~

I know I have said this a million times but get used to it. Your poems take me to places unknown. Words that pick me up and sail me to the wonders of the universe. It doesn't matter the theme of your creative writes, they all inspire , teach and whisk us away to far better places

This poem is intoxicatingly SPELL-BINDING.. I'll come back and leave a detailed comment. You're just too much of a POET. KUDOS!!!

Good very good i really felt the latin blood comming through the feminine side. it stirred me and if i was not careful it would intoxicate my senses well done

I love the first stanza. It makes me think that sometimes, things aren't always as they seem.

So beautifully written, I love the images and the way you write, magnificent!!!

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