Wait - Pleiades

Definitely a creative form of poetry to describe nature and its beauty. In particular I like how you used sounds of nature as adjectives and verbs to make it all come alive, poetically for the reader.

This form sounds so tough but then reading the flow, it seems so easy. The fact is that you made it look so simple. You simply amazes me with your choice of words. Great write.

Loved this ending:

welcoming giggling spring

all the best and take care

Wow, this is so beautiful. It's hard to do a form such as this and still capture the essence of your topic, but you seemed to do this so effortlessly. I adored the imagery, it made me feel there, in the moment. There is that winter waiting period from death to rebirth, and you captured it perfectly. Beautifully executed!

You mastered the form beautifully .........very soothing

Raj,
What a delightful poem, I am not much one for forms but I think this form was on the main boards as a contest or something. This would have fit in nicely among them. You have a knack for this type of poetry and getting the reader to connect with your poetry. Wonderful, thanks for the share.