What's So Good About Love?

I feel this way sometimes. I think we all do at some point. The thing is, you don't really get that kind of connection until you've really connected emotionally and developed that bond. It's hard, it takes time, but it's worth it.

I liked your poem. It was filled with mixed emotions; a longing for love, anger, sadness, and even self pity. Poems like this are the ones which drive people to relate and live through the experience.

I think what you need in your poems is spacing, because it helps understand the idea, is easy on the eyes and it gives drama to your poems. Maybe you need some rhythm, you can use rhyme, synonyms, or more metaphors.

You're on the right track though, keep it up, and keep writing. :)

A very good write :)
from the heart. 5 on 5!
keep up :)

We love this poem it express so much. You will find the girl your looking for eventually ^^

Have hopes up :D

Truly amazing.
actually, you sound alot like my old friend. gosh i miss him.

either way, amazing poem. keep writing, okay?

I am still crying after your poem, this a full load of emotions some unleashed some not

I like it

Ole