I Miss You (Acrostic)

by Meme   Feb 18, 2012


I inhaled for the last time at the very

Moment you decided to leave.
I think you have been gone for
So long that I forgot how to breathe.
Simultaneously; we shared a breath,

You exhaled life into me. Now, I'm an
Orphan of love; solely gave in to the
Unconsciousness, waiting for you.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Acrostic poetry is an art. and i love acrostic poetry. specially when they are panned very well. as this poem is written.. good work...

  • 12 years ago

    by broken sword

    Nice poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Simply beautiful, open and pure :-) x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Very beautiful, sad and poetic!

    Lovely poem.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    It's the first time I read an acrostic, and I feel that it isn't forced.

    It ended so fast.... that means I really adored this write.

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