by L
True, it doesn't matter how long it takes as long as there is love from both sides. I like the tone and the message in your poem. |
by UndeadGrace
Dang good stuff bro |
by Amreen
Good poem...good start...good flow....messaged conveyed to the right....!! |
by BlueJay
My gosh this is an amazing piece, simple but it is very well written and very descriptive... 5/5 |
by East Poetry
Second line "have" should be "has" |
by Mello193
This was really sweet. very true i suppose. nice job |
by Wafaa
I like this poem very much:) so true... good job! |
I love this poem :))! |
by Angel
Wow this explains life for many girl i love it :) |
by Rihanna
Wow speechless !!!! |
by Lifeless Doll
How beautiful :) great poem |
by Janna Antal
Loved it! |
by Yrem Crish
--I like the poem and it is so relatable for some people who been hurt before...and frustrated in the means of love. Yet, it not easy to open your heart again and to welcome love into you heart because of the past that you anticipate some way you will be hurt when you love again... |
by Thomas
Nice poem, good rhythm. |