Hmm...I to hope tha dreams come true !
Nicely writen in a sequence,njoyed the simplicity in ur makings..ending u made was also good... when u wake up !
U got that quality,preserve that ! Good job !
Itz 5/5 frm me.

Okay I think that this poem has potential, but I'd recommend you to change the title since it basicially gives away the whole idea already.
You should also consider adding some more punctuation because the way you've got it right now, it's incomplete.

I have to admit that even though our world is far from perfect and there is so much injustice, I still couldn't imagine everything being great and absolutely painfree, regardless what kind of pain because I think that the downs we experience, help us to appreciate the good times even more.