Very nice flow to it and you can feel the emotion and effort that went into it. i loved every second of it. 'whatever i do wont make the world spin a different way'. so heartfelt keep it up

So deep and meaningful 5/5

This is true to the heart and emotionaly sad but a linger of hope shines forth waiting for the call. A very educative piece and an eye opener to the chaos occuring in different societies; though we all crave for happiness and safety. Poverty, famine, drought, massacres and natural disasters are among the ills of our times. May The lord we serve, shower His mercy and blessings upon all and may God give us the will to help those in need ardently. Stay blessed dear, Mashallah! Peace.

Thx all :)

Wow..this is really a amazing piece of work.. :) i loved this.. Every words you have used in it are really stong.. it touched my heart.. You have wrote down my feelings over here.. this is what i always use to think helping needy peoples.. I really appreciate it ... Great work.. I loved ur poem.. :) 5/5

We all can see this harsh reality, children r dyin every day. Lets be one hand to make the world a better place. Oneday this world will be a better place.

A very heartfelt piece great job:)

Awesome piece..i luv t.

Awesome piece..i luv t.

What the hell ??? This is one of the best poems ive ever read as writing the flow wording was perfect but as a message its was amazing also the rhyms didnt seem forced .. splendid 5/5

So glad to come across this beautiful poem with such valuable theme. Emotions & reality expressed so elegantly, such lethal combination is very rarely found. Great write.

Echo of these lines did worked effectively:

Tiny fingers, tiny hands
Broken hearts in stranger's land

all the best and take care