by RedDragon Feb 18, 2012
category :
Special events /
christmas
A robin sits on a frosty white window ledge |
by BlueJay
I love the imagery in this piece. It is amazing and the style is nice. The flow really doesnt exist. The rhyme scheme is spotty, but I think it would be fabulous if you kept it up the whole way through. Though I did enjoy the piece and the theme, just those technical things caught my eye. Great piece, though I do believe a 3 is the best I can rate it... |