Arbutus (Doditsu)

by Maple Tree   Feb 19, 2012


Floral aromas ignite
Sharing one moons fantasy
I love only thee, precious
Goddess of the night

Arbutus: Is a flower; Meaning: I love only thee.

Doditsu-Japanese form consisting of one four lined, non rhyming stanza, syllables going 7-7-7-5.

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  • 12 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.You are an ardent lover of nature.In such simple words you magnify the spell of beauty.Awesome write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I always try to give in depth comments, but your poems don't allow me to do so (lol). It's just beautiful, each time, and I feel like I'm saying the same thing over. You are queen of nature and imagery!

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    You have a certain connection with nature and it shows in your poetry. I adore nature poems and if there is anyone who can pull one off this masterfully done it is definitely you. Absolutely beautiful write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Thank you for sharing this form .you nailed it as usual ! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful,

    Love the simplicity, gorgeous poem!

    x

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