It's hard for me to comment on poems of loss for personal reasons. But I thought this was filled with beauty and emotions. It brings a tear and the throat closes a little feeling the pain written ..
My heart goes out to you and yours

Thanks, stay blessed. Bye

This poem touches me /reminds me of my own loss on my doorstep .

Thanks for sharing your pain, we're all connected when it comes to birth and death. Blessings to you.

I thoguht this was a sad but great poem. I can really feel the emotion of sadness brought out here. The feeling of loss is a hard thing to deal with. In the future we will see our dead loved again so that will be a great thing to look forward to. Nice write. :)

Thank you for capitalizing the letter of the acrostic.
When I was reading, I was trying to see the acrostic but in my phone the window shrinks.

I want to say something that striked to me when I read the title.

You leave in us.. I don't know if it was a typo or I'm guessing this was on purpose.

But the word leave is when someone leaves. Like someone departed. Though, it sounds like live as it's still there. So I find that really creative.
Because losing someone is really tough, heartbreaking and hard to explain with words.

But even if they leave this earth, they still live in our hearts and memories.

I'm sorry for your lost.

Stunning piece. The ones we lose are never lost.Their roots are deep inside us and therefore our hearts unfurl. Peace.

Thanks for the comment, you right. Those we'd lost aren't gone, they're deep within our hearts. I'm grateful, blessings.

Yakori, that truly moved me mountains... I'm glad this loss is transformed into poetic brilliance.

allah bless you,:)

Ameen, thanks for the comment, I'm grateful. Blessings to you.

This is very touching.

I think you have done well with this form.

The way you described your brother was in such a way that I felt we got to know a little bit about him and his characteristics.

A beautiful dedication

x

Thanks for the comment, i'm grateful. Bless you..

It was hard to read I lost a dear love not to long ago and this poem is a great tribute