Comments : Hole

  • 12 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    AMAZING I love the story

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Great story ... i have to bow for how long it was i can never write so long very ... keep writting well penned

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Nice one here. I think its really hard making long poems work, keeping the reader interested and all, but this one did it. Nice story type poem.