The Sunshine

by Jad   Feb 20, 2012


Our shallow hearts have died
in the embrace of winters love
and even our silent cries
are forgotten up above.

Yet the brilliance of the sun
cascades hope in our hearts,
because when we feel outdone
we are kept from breaking apart.

The cascading yellow rays
tell stories of survival and hope
as the spring lies and bays
for the coming day of rebirth.

So my Sunshine fall down
and envelop this bleak soul
for I know within silent sounds
we all can be made whole.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Amazing poem :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I love how you divided this piece with two opposite emotions (sad-hopeful) and two different seasons (winter-summer). The subtle rhymes worked for me and the ending was kind of in between.. it can be interpreted as a sad/happy ending.
    Excellent piece 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I can't express the emotions that brought to me as I read this poem.... Mercy, It took my breath away... the energy, power, and beauty that the sun can bring Is a beautiful part of nature and you captured all of It's elegance within this piece.. the rhyme flow Is beautiful... well done~

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Another beautiful piece. So nice to see you on a roll here :)

    Loved this perfect ending:

    So my Sunshine fall down
    and envelop this bleak soul
    for I know within silent sounds
    we all can be made whole

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    HAHA Jadd so you did it! yap, yellowissh, glowish, and my poem indeed meets all the criteriasss !

    this is very hopefull, very well penned, the imagination is incredible, and word choice is perfect ...hope to see it on the front page like really, and no not being selfish, it's just ddfferent and hopeful..it's like donu..ME haha

    thank you Austin :]

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