This blood on my lips

This is very intriguing... I love it!
Amazing suspense, and I hope you could write something about maybe whos blood it is? Its sort of an amazing cliffhanger if it was in a story! 5/5

Yes I too do agree with others above...!!
It does seem quite mysterious....!!

I agree with the girls above me... ewwww

that being said, I do love the darkness... It almost feels to me as if it's a vampire-ish type poem.... almost like you have been turned into a vampire and just realizing it.... really a twisted piece... awesome!!

Uhmm.. its strange, It makes me wonder how does anyone knows if it taste like their own or not? Who knows, and I actually don't want to know. Eerie indeed.

O.o

-takes a careful step back-

lol
Dark and Eerie. Maybe it's best that it STAYS a mystery, huh O.o