by Maple Tree Feb 20, 2012
category :
Life, society /
about society
Hypnotized by street lights, I breathe springtime |
by Karla
Stunning piece sista. I am always in love with what you write. |
by Britt
I feel like I've been given a map and placed within the city you speak of. It was SO vivid and intense, it truly made me feel as if I knew exactly the places you were describing. So descriptive, something you rock at. |
Your the best in portraying thoughts through nature. A lovely and intoxicating piece, fantastic and clear imagery. Telling in summary the ills that happens in the vicinity. In as much as you wish to stay in the environs, nature says no because its been stained with murder and nasty happenings. I love how deep the words get into one. I admire your writing prowess. Take care, blessings to you dear. Cheers! :) |
by Moonlit Candles
Wow nice write. The emotion in this poem was awesome. Your metaphors here were awesome with nice illustrations. could really feel this poem come to live. Nice write. :) |
by Lioness
Oh the images are so real and very descriptive. I am trying to work out which city you are referring to but I've no luck lol |