Love ( Collab )

by Justin & BlueJay   Feb 20, 2012


You can only see appearances,
Like the color of my skin
Not knowing the beauty that's inside
That you can only see within

There's so much hidden
like a different person that is me
but you wont look deep enough
for you I'm too free

I'm more than meets the eye,
Just take a second look
Because all you do is judge me
Like I'm some sort of crook

But now I have something
with meaning to say
and no this is not a game
for us to go and play

We are all humans,
Living life our different ways
But to you we do not look the same
So you cast us out astray

This is where society burned us
ever so long ago,
this is why us they will never know
but here's my point, here I go...

My heart beats just like yours
I feel pain just as you
I've loved and I've hurt
So what's the different between us two

So whats the big deal
if I love you and you love me?
Why do their thoughts matter
when we could be free?
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Collab that I did with Miss Prolific Poetess, It was my first one but I think it turned out very well. Want to thank her for letting me work with her.

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  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I love how this poem didn't exactly rhyme all the way to the ending but I did enjoyed how two poets could make a poem so well knitted together and makes me love the poem because it does flow and I think this poem should've gone into the catagory "life" because while it does have love in it it has more life in it and it is just a motivation and a speech that's so beautiful as it was tranformed into a wonderful poem so great job to Madison and yourself for making a gift of poetry! 5/5

    -Mori

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was great. I liked how at first the suspense was building up then you were like" here we go". Was a nice connection for continuing the poem. All in all a great poem. And nice work with the emotion. Nice write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    I thought this was a great poem. It doesn't matter what others think and they might give their opinions and all but in the end if you really love that person and they love you that is all that matters. Nice write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I'm glad I asked to write with you because this turned out very well.Thank you for agreeing to go along with me and my "insane" idea of us working together.

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