by Sylvia
She sounds like a good witch, lol, using her hexes to turn humans into purple purring cats. I can see that image now. I wish we could see the shapes on this site, that is a big wish for lots of people. |
by Jad
I enjoyed the poem and I think the topic is very interesting and you did a great job with the vivid descriptions in the poem. You had a good steady flow throughout the poem though I believe the form made it harder to read and the flow would get off a little. However you did very well with this challenge and I believe you did a good idea at describing what you did about the witch giving us plenty of details. |
A great flow, and a nice descriptive read. You seem to be able to write anything with ease. Well done my friend |
by Decayed
You do great in shape poetry :) |
Chudel would be proud of you... :) |