by The Poet Behind The Poems Feb 21, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The broken glass tears through my bare feet. |
I love this piece so much. Others judge and walk right past homeless people without even a care in the world... acting like they are too good to even be near them. It's heartbreaking... they don't know that person or their story. Most think homeless people are just on drugs or alcoholics, which some are... but there are others that just are unfortunate, lost their job or their home...etc. You never know... sometimes all it takes is a kind word or a few dollars to lift their spirits. |
by KayKay
I like the ending of it. Good job. |
by Lifeless Doll
I really love the story behinf this, I think your poetry is a little changed but in a very good sense, your becoming better and better everyday :) |
Wow, the ending was perfect and the scene was very eye opening on how some people want to be looked at instead of looked through. |
by DirtRoadGirl
You are an amazing writer!!! I am sooo jealouse of you ability to take any random thing and turn it inti something beautiful and emotional. You make serious things seem ten times more serious and you do so with so much talent. Incredibly amazing. |