Ssshh wispher while you read this

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This was so lovely...a very tender moment you have captured with your words. May I just point out a few typos if you don't mind?

Silver midnight light shining,
Overlooking: the castle towers.

Watching the pale moon light.
People are walking slowly and on unsure legs.

The trees are reduced to shadows.
Covering the subdued light: from the streetlamps.

You are lying naked in bed, lights shine on you,
The flat is silent besides your breathing.

Even in the air there is magic from our love nest,
I feel tears running down my cheeks.

We have achieved the unreachable,
Like taking, the fifth dan: the black belt in love.

Our clothes *is* (are or still) spread, like we rushed in bed.
Jacket in the hall, the red dress in the living room.

Last are your string and stockings.
You are smiling in sleep, satisfied.

I place a glass of water on the night table,
Kiss your shoulder,* togg * (tuck) you in, ssshh.

Also..your title....should be whisper.

Really liked this one from you!

Hi Thanks for kind comments

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