I've seen so many amazing openings to poems lately,
and this is an example. What I love about this opening and what I got from it is the beautiful words as well as the meaning. In my mind I am picturing a person with their hands over their eyes crying. The music would obviously be such a sad heartbreaking song.

Beautiful poem lovely!!!

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A beautiful piece of nicely penned words of yours that soothes the mind and comforts the body and soul. As i read, i could feel the affections consuming me in a pool of serenity. The poem is full of hope and the will to further ready the mindset before arrival of the day at hand. Inspiring read, i like the smooth flow that revolves in it. Your structure is fantastic, starting from how 'the music starts off in a farewell' to the subject, to the 'emotional margins', to the 'banks of the river' and finally the 'comfort in the emptiness of space'. Intriguing transitions, flowing together in their rhythm. I'm moved by this poem, i hail you dear. Be blessed. :).

Its really great:) I love it

It's such an amazing piece... love 'the third bank of the river'

and 'tomorrow started two hours ago' ..

Fantabulous