Suicide

by marlon lumangyao   Feb 22, 2012


Staring at the sky,
reminiscing memories,
tears fall from the eye,
a tears of bitterness.

oh God!
forgive me,
she's all i ever had,
why take away?

this is a nightmare,
not just a dream,
not even a trial,
but a punishment.

now i'm ready to take off,
thousand feet from the roof,
your betrayal is a cursed,
to die is the cure.

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  • 12 years ago

    by marlon lumangyao

    Funny because i wanted to do that crazy thing when i'm in trouble, but afraid to die

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    It is very well written,

    and i honestly understand the feeling within this poem, it is very hard to lose a love one

    nice flow of poem and word choice to express these emotions....

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I don't think to die is the cure, :-s
    Not at all... I don't know what else to say. But to die or suicide are not the solution.

    I like the flow of the poem but I'm not to fond to the content. But still it was well written.

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