Comments : While the stars are whispering to each other

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This poem makes me want to learn the language.

    I find that it is so beautiful and such a poetic poem.

    I really enjoyed the read.

    The stars are whispering to each other. Heaven lies down to listen
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    This image is my fav!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I was reading the first part and I could understand a few words. Spanish and Portuguese do differ allot, but it's interesting how the words look and I want to understand Portuguese just so I could read this poem on my own.
    I love this piece specially this part.

    " I am where I was supposed to be and I have been where I should always be. I recognize this place, seeing for the first time what I have ever seen because you are here looking at this same sky and unfurling the flowers with the same words that touch the metals and the oceans"

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    This prose-poem transcends the individual. it may have been for George, but the true target is what in Celtic lore we call Bride, the goddess of the land.

    " something can be happy in me regardless of how many names happiness can be called."

    Humans experience the divine through a heirophony - a physical manifestation having profound subjective meaning. Your recognition that essence goes beyond language is implicit embracing of that intuitive grasp known as sartori - it is a glimpse of nirvana which changes ones life.

    But here I rattle on, applying thought and reason to the very absence of reason: Knowing in its most gutteral sense.

    astounding capture of the moment, Karla.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Very moving .......awesome Karla :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    What is in me is nameless... I feel that all the time, whether in happiness or sadness.

    I was sucked in... drained by the glory in every line and the emotions.

    love this

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    God bless you in folds, for sharing this exquisite masterpiece..
    It's profound, great and beautiful imagery, excellent theme.
    I'm speechless, how I wish I have more to say to this awe-inspiring poem.
    You're a blessing to this generation of poets. Your an epitome of inspiration to me, bless you loads.
    Bye :}

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Oh wow
    Words can not come close to the exquisite wording and beauty of this piece. So I bow to the Queen in all her talents..